9 December 2011





amber's poem #2


wind scatters the air

whistling is heard

trees sway like dancers





lonely puppy in the wind

sadness in its body


i run to pick it up

tail wags...tongue licks


inside...fire burns


happy, sleepy puppy


shhhhhh




5 comments:

Jane Robertson said...

That is beautiful! Sad and happy.

Amber you are a poet like your Mum. You have a way with words.

I am NOT supposed to be reading blogs. I am supposed to be WORKING. Just a little detour... ssshhhh....

Pukeko G said...

Wow ! That is a great poem, Jane covered it well, what a clever young lady you are, drawing and writing :o)> And anyone intensely concentrating all the time needs a mental break so you are allowed J.

Jane Robertson said...

Thanks PG :-)

Did you draw that puppy Amber? He's cute.

Unknown said...

Thanks Jane and Daddy. Yes I did draw the puppy :)

dkm said...

Adorable puppy. A budding artist, methinks.